First trial..is it ok?

The sun is shinning so bright,
It makes me feel all right,
the moon is lighting in the night,
it a sign for night-night...
The stars are twinkling in the skies,
Dancing and making rhymes for my lullabies.

I love the tranquil night,
As I close my eyes very tight,
I can feel myself safe and snug,
Especially when I sleep alone in the dim light.

Fairytale is my bedtime story.
Reading by my daddy.
Hugs and kisses mummy,
Hugs and kisses daddy...

mummy said, sleep tight baby,
and daddy said, dun let the bed bug bites dearie..

Muahh..Night night...